i’m looking back on the process my final draft has improved from what I initially started I said this because while looking at that final draft, I think I have included many improvements from when I first started. Yes I still have some mistakes, but I have learned how to fix them and maybe look out for them. in the future when I’m writing an essay or a paper. While looking back on this process, I have learned any fundamental ideas like using it to better understand how to fix your writing and a new way of setting up a draft and maybe use some Ideas to pinpoint what you actually wanted to be about.

I can’t of it, but my third draft was very messy. It didn’t include when it was not very informative on many issues and got reviewed it because I was able to alter it and fix it to how I wanted it to look. I also had random capitalization at certain points that needs to be capitalized and when I went over, I was able to fix what I thought didn’t need to be fixed.

This is the outline for what was to come and some details that supported what I was writing some feedback I got was I needed more detail on how to improve what was already here because it never actually explained anything. Looking at it now it was very messed up and did not make any sense so that lead to my draft.

These are the first peer review many of the comments that I’ve revived was to fix some of what I was writing and explain my key moments more clearly. How I reacted to this was actually happy because then I got a key understanding of what others thought of my work and how they would make it better for a better revised and improved final product.

To start the learning analysis process we started by doing learning vignettes which helped gain the idea to how to structure our essay with the moments that we’ve learned from. In this process we needed three significant moments that shaped us in our life and I’ve used moments from when I was younger ranging from language, thinking and, dealing with personal conflicts. This all affected how I used moments to better the understanding.