I can’t of it, but my third draft was very messy. It didn’t include when it was not very informative on many issues and got reviewed it because I was able to alter it and fix it to how I wanted it to look. I also had random capitalization at certain points that needs to […]
This is the outline for what was to come and some details that supported what I was writing some feedback I got was I needed more detail on how to improve what was already here because it never actually explained anything. Looking at it now it was very messed up and did not make any […]
These are the first peer review many of the comments that I’ve revived was to fix some of what I was writing and explain my key moments more clearly. How I reacted to this was actually happy because then I got a key understanding of what others thought of my work and how they would […]
To start the learning analysis process we started by doing learning vignettes which helped gain the idea to how to structure our essay with the moments that we’ve learned from. In this process we needed three significant moments that shaped us in our life and I’ve used moments from when I was younger ranging from […]
During this time for The Guggenheim Museum as my topic I’m using web articles for some of my main sources of information for my topic and book publishing’s as a mere form of evidence or a basic understanding of the topic. These support my topic/ideas by give me a basic understanding of what I truly […]
Some theories that I’m using is past relevance for my proposal like how does it fit into the city? The cite I initially wanted was the Museum of Natural History, but changed to the Guggenheim Museum which I found out was an art museum in 5th avenue. Something’s that has actually helped my process for […]
A learning objective that I believe has developed throughout the year is my development side on different texts and analyzing how I will use it inside my writing. I think it first increased with the first writing assignment, which did teach me how to properly structure an essay to college level standards instead of regular […]
An article that I plant to use is about the High-line. I thought it would be interesting to use this to see if development. What happened in 100 years from now. Well, looking through the article some information was helpful to realize the historic background on the subject, annotating was helpful to me because I […]
During my learning analysis essay I used passed learning experiences to acknowledge that you need them in order ti grow in some type of way. The purpose of this was to reminisce in a sense of how I’ve grown to accept and deal with past struggles that influenced my way of thinking and helped me […]
This week we’ve focused on writing and in this process I have learned new skills that I believe can help for the future. One thing that has helped was writing style, how you may ask? Well writing our three paragraphs actually helped because my stories sounded similar in style but different all the same with […]
